
Pros:
-the text is short and easy to read(reader friendly)
-the information is related to human(like size of the eyes, picture that showing the length of giant squid and human)
-good color presentation
-real pictures
How to improve?
-add timeline,to know about the time.
-add a paragraph about the legend of the giant squid,so it becomes more attrative!
-add "where does it live"(just like picture 2),to know more about the giant squid.
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